The Path to Oneself

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The Naked Essence

("The Naked Essence" — Georgian translation)

In this silence lies all my knowledge,
In this emptiness — the lines of love.
Read me with your heart and call me by name,
So that I may return to your spiritual kingdom.
Do not seek me — I will come on my own.
Do not wait for me — I still have work to do.
Today my soul is naked to the very end,
And I carry the first star in my heart.
I must pass through the darkness,
I must bear your truth.
Even if they mock my naked soul,
I know — this is my path, and it is right.
I left my garments behind — purity remains,
Another’s pain burns within me as my own.
I should have fled from people,
But I go to them — this is my path.
A delicate candle sways in the grip of the wind,
Thousands of hands reach toward the fire.
In the depths I hear ancient, primal voices,
And my soul throbs with joy.
White ash — this is what remains.
The wind scatters it in all four directions.
Within myself I build an eternal temple
And sing of your radiant story.
Nothing is in vain — not a single moment,
For are you the one who makes me speak, or am I yours?
I walk again at night along the misty path
Toward the star — into your spiritual kingdom.
Song: "The Naked Essence"
Author: Sergei Veretennikov



Armenian:


The Naked Essence

("The Naked Essence" — Armenian translation)


In this silence lies my understanding,
In this emptiness — lines of love.
Read me, call me by name,
So that I may return to your kingdom.
Do not seek me — I will come on my own.
Do not wait — there is still work to do.
Today my soul is naked, without clothing,
And I carry the first star in my breast.
I must pass through this darkness,
I must bear your truth.
Even if they spit upon my naked, exposed soul,
I know — this is my true path.
The clothing has fallen away; the essence remains,
And I feel another’s pain as my own.
I should have fled far from people,
But I go toward them — this is my path.
A slender candle trembles in the wind,
Millions of hands reach toward the fire.
Within me the primordial voice resounds,
And my soul trembles with joy.
White ash — this is what remains.
The wind carries it in all four directions.
Within myself I build an eternal temple,
And sing the good news of your light.
Nothing was in vain, not a single second.
Did you create me, or did I create you?
Still I continue walking through the nighttime mist,
Toward the star, toward your divine kingdom.
Song: “The Naked Essence”
Author: Sergei Veretennikov





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Song: “The Naked Essence”


The Naked Essence

("The Naked Essence" — Kazakh translation)


In this silence — my knowledge lies,
In this empty space — a song of love.
Read me, call me by my name,
So that I may return to you, to your spiritual land.
Do not seek me — I will come myself,
Do not wait for me — I still have much work to do.
Today my soul is naked, worn,
And I bring the first star in my heart.
I must pass through the darkness of night,
I will carry your truth.
Even if they spit in the face of my naked soul,
I know — this is my path, my own direction.
The clothes have fallen away; truth remains,
I feel the sorrow of others with my heart.
I could have fled from people,
But I go to them — this is my path.
A fragile lamp trembles in the wind,
Thousands of hands reach toward the fire.
Within me I hear an ancient, primal voice,
And my soul trembles with joy along with it.
Only white ash remains — that is all,
The wind scatters it in every direction.
Within myself I build an eternal temple,
And sing your radiant message.
Nothing has been in vain — not a single moment,
Did I create you, or did you create me?
Even so, I walk through the mist of night,
Toward a star — toward your sacred land.
Song: “The Naked Essence”
Author: Sergei Veretennikov



Polish:




The Naked Essence

("The Naked Essence" — poetic translation into Polish)


In this silence — my wisdom lies hidden.
In this emptiness — the words of love remain.
Read me, call me from the depths—
So that I may rise and return to your kingdom.
Do not seek me — I will come to you myself.
Do not wait — I still have many things to do.
Today my soul is naked, in complete need,
And in my heart — the first star from heaven.
I must walk through the darkness of this night,
Carry your truth — bright and divine.
Let them spit upon my naked soul—
I know that this is the right and straight path.
The garments fell — the essence remained,
I feel a stranger’s suffering as my own.
I could gladly flee from people,
But I go to them — this is my path, my armor.
A slender candle trembles in the wind.
Millions of hands draw near to the fire.
Within, I still hear primordial sounds,
And my soul trembles and plays with joy.
White ash — only this remains.
The wind scatters it in all four directions.
Within myself I build an enduring temple,
And sing of your joy — like bells.
Nothing was in vain. Nothing has passed away.
Did you conceive me, or did I conceive you, angel?
And yet I walk through the extinguished greenery of night
Toward the star that boldly leads to your kingdom.

Song: “The Naked Essence”
Author: Sergei Veretennikov (Sergey Veretennikov)




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The Naked Essence

("The Naked Essence" — poetic translation into French)


In this silence — my knowledge rests.
In this emptiness — lines of love to behold.
Read me gently, call me softly,
So that I may return to your hidden kingdom.
Do not seek me — I will come to you.
Do not wait for me — I have other tasks to do.
My soul is naked, without a garment,
And in my breast the star of night shines.
I must walk through the darkness,
Carry your truth without hesitation.
Let them spit upon my unclothed soul,
I know it is right — it is my commitment.
The garments have fallen; the essential remains,
And another’s pain becomes personal to me.
I should flee, far from humankind,
But I move toward them — this is my true path.
A fragile flame dances in the wind,
Millions of hands reach toward its song.
Within me resonates a primordial sound,
My soul trembles with celestial joy.
White ash — that is all that remains,
The wind scatters it east and west.
Within myself I build an eternal temple,
And sing of your gentle, immortal light.
Nothing is in vain, nothing is lost,
Did you create me? Or did I conceive you?
And yet I walk through the shadow of night,
Toward the star that leads to your hidden kingdom.
Song: “The Naked Essence”
Author: Sergei Veretennikov
 

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Oh, what a sincere and deeply moving performance!
The translation is both accurate and beautiful as well. Thank you, Веретенников Сергей Веретенников Сергей !
 

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How wonderful! Your poems are a conversation between the Soul and God, while the music and vocals incredibly intensify this feeling! Each language adds its own nuance to the experience, and when you listen to them one after another, you are enveloped by a piercing sense of unity in diversity! This feeling is strengthened by the fact that I know English, Spanish, and Ukrainian, and understand that the same thing is being said in all the languages.

The development of AI is astonishing. To reflect the performance and music characteristic of different countries and languages so accurately and subtly is remarkable. Thank you for a truly spiritual international concert!
 

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The newspaper is from yesterday, but the Soul itself is singing. I read the poems several times too; my very soul was speaking.
 

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Namaste! All four melodies are wonderful. I liked the first one. It contains a vivid emotion, a cry from the soul, feelings on the verge.
 

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I decided to conduct an experiment because I wanted to make sure that my first impressions of listening to the Indian version of the song "The Naked Essence" were accurate.
I listened to the Ukrainian versions for three days after the Indian version, and then to the French and other versions.
At the end, I listened to the Indian version again, and each time my inner state confirmed my first impressions: it was not simply my mind or personal preferences.
All the performances are wonderful, but the Indian version immediately makes the muladhara and sahasrara begin spinning much more intensely. I clearly feel the connection between earth and sky, and this energy brings me into a beautiful meditative state; I want to keep listening and listening.
Thank you, OM Shanti! 🙏🙏🙏
 

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Another song, "Yesterday's Newspaper," was released on the TG channel. For some reason, no one is talking about it at all. And yet it is absolutely extraordinary because many women, when listening to it, will see themselves in it—their deeply personal stories. It is true art to create something in which everyone finds something of their own, something about themselves and for themselves. Something that touches you deeply, grabs hold of you, and makes you experience a storm of emotions! Many women have lost their men now, and this song is about tenderness, about love that lives in the heart despite time, about letting go of the past, and about the great Life...
This poem touched me when it first appeared, and even then I really wanted to sing it myself and put my feelings into it. It feels as though it is word for word about me and my life)))
What is remarkable is that, after quite some time has passed since this poem appeared, and since the feelings it evoked back then, I have changed too and now see something completely different in this song. But I still see it (!) because it really is there: layers of meaning, imagery, and messages...
I bow deeply to you, Teacher! I admire your Art and the Light emanating from your creativity in every direction!
 

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What can I say? French has swept everything away—it’s not for nothing that they call it the language of love. I like all the versions very much, and it’s extremely difficult to choose, but if I had to be strict, not just one but two: the first and the fourth. In general, in all the languages, it’s simply some kind of miracle—everything is melodic and in rhythm. The Polish and Moldovan versions must not be overlooked either; they stand out too, and are very, very beautiful. But the main thing is the energy flow, and it is present everywhere. Thank you!🙏❤🌈
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Namaste
I’ve just seen the newspaper version too—very beautiful. The words touch the soul as well. The bare essence in Georgian and Armenian is also a masterpiece.❤🙏🌈
 
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Благодарю, ОМ ШАНТИ! До глубины души тронуло стихотворение! Просто чудесно, нет слов, да и не подобрал бы, тишина ответ на все!
 

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Намасте!
Как и обещал в пятницу я испытал на америкосах композиции,первый пришел испанец он услышал и ему понравилось также и на английском тоже сказал очень сердечно мелодично,потом сел рубероид тот тоже слушал и даже на китайском и украинском,был в восторге ,потом сел молодняк америкос с затычки в ушах это понятно что он слушает только свое я вкл громче ноль на массу, буду иследовать завтра,сегодня суббота,сели бразильцы,тоже понравилось,французы тоже понравилось но когда включил на французком,тут беразбору все наслаждалась те кто не знал французский тоже в восторге и когда поставил 4 композиции на французском и сказал какую выбрать лучшую? все в один голос сказали все. 😂ну а так -же русский всем понравился молдавском а поставил индийцам они не поняли и сказали что уних 22 местных языка поэтому не понятно, поляки тоже в восторге от украинского, грузинского тащилась тоже,и от своего, Увсех коренных спрашивал как грамматика грамматика, слова все в норме вот такое иследование.😂❤🙏
 

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Продолжаю утром слушать песню "Голая суть" как практику.
Сначала слушаю на украинском, в сердце сияет свет, грудь раскрывается.
Чувствую себя победителем с Богом в сердце. Особенное состояние от окончания песни.
После прослушиваю в индийском исполнении. Как только начинает звучание я прихожу в состояние полной отдачи перед Богом, Его энергиям. Я совсем безвольна перед Ним.Это состояние сложно описать, сердце в это время подвластно только Ему и мне это нравится. Ничто не приводило меня в такое состояние.
Спасибо ОМ Шанти за Ваши стихи, за возможность прикоснуться через них с Богом! 🙏
 

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"Голая суть " -это что- то . нет слов , одни эмоции..И музыка и текст трогают до глубины Души!
Огромная благодарность Вам , Сергей Васильевич. 🙏 ❤ ❤ ❤
Еще хочу добавить , что озвучка , исполнение песни на Высшем уровне , что очень , очень важно.. :giggle: ❤ ❤ ❤
 
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