The Path to Oneself

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Path to the Self

And above the field—a moonlit tale
Shines quietly in the late hour.
And a star, like someone's conscience,
Falls without asking us.

The grass lies evenly by the house,
Slightly pressed down beside the porch.
And some languor in the soul
Keeps murmuring and weeping without end.

By the gate, the birch is still the same,
As in childhood, only grown taller.
And the fence is still the same. Even
The paint is the same, only darker.

The wildflowers gaze sleepily,
As though waiting for someone to pick them.
And the brook runs steadily
To the river with the willow where heather blooms.

Everything seems just as it was.
Everything seems as it always has been.
Only with the years, everything has grown more precious:
This field, the old house, the river...

The creak of the gate, the path into the grove,
The smell of hay that comes in dreams.
A leaf, slightly translucent in the sun,
A spiderweb among wildflowers...

Only the silence cannot quiet down.
It whispers with the tenderness of those who are gone.
Sometimes it approves, touching the soul.
Sometimes it condemns with its own smile.

And I have no strength to speak with the silence.
It does not scold; it only repeats:
Do not grieve, we are with you forever.
May the soul release and forgive everyone.

Sergey Veretennikov (Oryol poet and writer)

15.04.2025
 

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I have read quite a few poems, but they did not move me: sometimes the words were rather stony, sometimes the rhythm was rather drumlike—no offense to the authors. Here, the theme is dear to me, rural, gentle and heartfelt, as though a clear, tranquil stream were flowing, babbling and running over the pebbles...... So melodious, tender, and it smelled so strongly of childhood, milk, the stove, a hot round loaf...... And it made me long to return to the people dear to my heart..... And the picture is extraordinary too; it makes you want to step inside the house.......
 

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The poem and the review moved me to tears.
 

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The Naked Essence

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In this silence lies my knowledge.
In this emptiness—lines about love.
Read me, and call for me.
So that I may return to your kingdom.

Do not seek me—I will come to you myself.
And do not wait for me—there are still things to do.
Today my soul is stripped completely bare,
And I carry the first star in my breast.

I must pass through this darkness.
I must carry your truth.
Let them spit into my naked soul.
I am certain this is how it must be.

The clothes are cast off; the essence is exposed.
And I feel another's pain as my own...
I should run farther away from people.
But I go toward them—for this is my path.

A slender candle burns in the wind.
Millions of hands reach toward the fire...
I feel the primordial sound within,
And my soul trembles with joy.

White ash. That is all there is.
The wind scatters it in every direction.
Within myself I build an eternal temple
And sing your joyful tidings.

It is not in vain. None of it is in vain!
Were you invented by me, or I by you?
Yet I walk through the nighttime half-darkness
Toward the night star, to your kingdom.

Author: © Sergey Veretennikov (Oryol poet and writer)
23.05.2014. All poems: Your Yoga. Poems. Sergey Veretennikov. Books.
 

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Namaste, dear, precious Sergei Vasilyevich, Веретенников Сергей Веретенников Сергей 🙏🏻☀ Every poem you write is a profound experience, in the best sense of the word. Because each of your creations contains an incredibly deep meaning—one that permeates every cell when it is realized⚡💖⚡ But “The Naked Essence” has just torn my heart into a million pieces!!❤🔥 Thank you for being who you are! And for giving us everything possible and impossible, day after day, step by step, in such abundance🌹🙏🏻🌹🙏🏻🌹
 

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Thank you! Astonishing! It touches something deep inside! Every line goes straight to the heart! I’ll reread it as an example of steadfastness of Spirit.
 

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Wonderful!
I used not to be particularly fond of reading poetry. I often skipped it..
These poems touch my heart very deeply. And yet they don’t make me sad; on the contrary, they make me want to live. And to be Alive in this life. Not in a dream. But alive...
Thank you, Om Shanti!!! For yet another opportunity to touch the Miracle! And to watch this Miracle change me, correct me, caress me, and at the same time awaken me!
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It turned out beautifully with the music too—touching and piercing 🙏🏻💖 Is this really AI?
 

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Thank you, Om Shanti! Both the poetry and the music are in harmony...
 

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And I feel another’s pain as my own!
This resonates so deeply with our Teacher, Om Shanti. A deep bow and heartfelt thanks for the poetry and music! With the trembling and high vibrations in my chest, I feel an indescribable state of excitement and bliss!
 

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“The Naked Essence” as a song is simply magnificent—ecstasy, bravissimo!
I felt it much more vividly through this performance than when reading it.
But I have a musical ear, and I perceive things more intensely through music, right down to the depths of my soul.
Thank you, Om Shanti 🙏
 

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A writer’s star hour has begun :)
 

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Om Shanti, I’m so happy for you—what you created with AI is simply fantastic🤩🧚‍♀️
Songs like these set to your poems will quickly gather a huge army of fans around you! This really is your star hour! I’m truly, truly happy for you!
 

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I feel a mismatch between the mood of the poem and the music, the tempo, and so on, as well as between the vocal intonations and the poem’s content. There are too many contradictory impressions. The protagonist seems to be Him, yet it is a female voice singing. I wasn’t trying to judge it; I’m describing my impression. But I was strongly emotionally engaged, and I’m surprised that this is AI. Perhaps I’m very out of touch with the times.
The poem is beautiful, subtle, and heartfelt.
 

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00* 243 00* 243 , poetry written in the voice of the soul.
The soul is mine, and in Russian it is feminine 👸
 

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How wonderful, Sergei Vasilyevich, excellent! This also shows us how boundless human possibilities are today. ❤🌹❤
 

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Namaste, a very beautiful song, and the music touches the soul. 🌈❤🙏
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Namaste, I listened to it once, but I just can’t resist adding my own two cents. It touched me so deeply that today I made this composition my meditation. Pop singers could envy your voice; it doesn’t sound like an amateur’s at all. Sergey, I wish you many more such compositions. Brilliant 🙏❤🌈💥
 
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У меня песня не раскрывается , не могу судить (пишут , что произошла ошибка). ... Но хотела здесь повторить , что накопала в своих исследованиях в теме про число 108 (ничего раньше не знала о нем до публикации в Школе). Там , где с помощью фотографий (текст скопировать , чтобы отправить его ... смогла только так) из дневника записи вставила в тему.
Фамилия Веретенников - имеет 12 знаков/букв. Сумарным кодом его рождения , как и кода числа "108" является девятка "9". Если 12 умножить на 9 , то выходит 108! Его имя - Сергей - 6 знаков - 6 умножить на 9 будет 54 . Если упростить этот код до однозначного состояния , то это "9".
Это я к тому , что Волшебные способности Учителя прописаны в Истории Его Души. Вот как интересно исследовать мир:)☀💫
 

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